Today we had to write about a short clip we watched. Our goal was to describe IN DETAIL what we saw. This was just a practice so then when we wrote our own stories, we know how to write in detail and don't forget to leave things out. It helps the reader get a picture in their head, like a movie, of what I am writing.
This is the clip we used.
(Only the first 1 minute - about the boy sleeping through his alarms)
This is what I wrote. The gentle breeze blow through the open window. The curtain swayed safely.
under the window the raydo was resting on the drak brown conid and on the conid there were book.
on the raydo the time showed 6:59 AM and when it was 7:00 the blue light came on and it said good morning
Do you think I have described what happened in lots of detail?
Please leave me a comment to let me know if I did achieve my goal or not.
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