The wedding

''It is a glorious day to have our wedding outside'' said James. James even said I already got the plans for our wedding'' but Jane said can we save our money for our close and  food. ''It is too late to save our money'' James said. Jane just said that because she was it ready for the wedding and she was even don't ready for kids so she ran as fast like a  cheddar but... the husband was so sad that Jane was lost. she was just at the fantin sitting down and hopefully that the wedding stoped and it did.

The only man standing.

one day there was a big  war going for two weeks!.
They were fighting for food and water because mostly the bad people were so greedy for the food, water.
There was lots of the bad people killing the permit for sneaking in to get the food for their kids
 but if they get coti sneaking in the bad people will kill there family but... sam was the only man standing on earth and he even had food,water

your private things and public things

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if    we give people our private staff and even if  they are not your friend  and in your family do not give  your private staff. BY Lia 

sunset

One day it was sunset and there was a girl with red hair walking but she didn't know that it was pitch black because her hair was in her way and  it was to windy.

Rose file in the water and shouted HELP!'' HELP!''

sunset

One day it was sunset and there was a girl with red hair walking but she didn't know that it was pitch black because her hair was in her way and  it was to windy.

Rose file in the water and shouted HELP!'' HELP!''

going to school

Dawn look after your sister at school!'' dad said Dawn talled dad are you going to pick us up at 9:00 because if you pick us at 9:00 .we will be at home playing in the glorious day 

A foggy day

It was a foggy morning there were two boys walking along with no chrabol but they were going to be  in CHRABOL... By eating the BIG BAD WOLF! grapps and draking his water   






















































































































































































































































































































































  






   

Learning my basic facts

Today we are practising learning our basic facts.
we are using the game speed skills to do this. 
This beating your own score from before.It is not about beating other people.It is about beating yourself.Learning my basic facts and timestables will help me move up levels.

MY Alarm

Today we had to write about a short clip we watched. Our goal was to describe IN DETAIL what we saw. This was just a practice so then when we wrote our own stories, we know how to write in detail and don't forget to leave things out. It helps the reader get a picture in their head, like a movie, of what I am writing.

This is the clip we used.
(Only the first 1 minute - about the boy sleeping through his alarms)



This is what I wrote. The gentle breeze blow through the open window. The curtain swayed safely.
 under the window the raydo was resting on the drak brown conid and on the conid there were book.
on the raydo the time showed 6:59 AM and when it was 7:00 the blue light came on and it said good morning 

Do you think I have described what happened in lots of detail?
Please leave me a comment to let me know if I did achieve my goal or not.

My recount

One day me and my brother and sister was playing hide seek but my cat was sleeping and when he woke up like a lion he sheikh  as big as a giraffe's neck he smat something yummy like he's nose was big like a hippo's nose to small but when I woke up I said rockey! rockey! where are you boy come home to me''! but rockey! was just in the bosch  having a nice sleep.

                                   THE END                            
 

One day me and my brother and sister was playing hide seek but my cat was sleeping and when he woke up like a lion he sheikh  as big as a giraffe's neck he smat something yummy like he's nose was big like a hippo's nose to small but when I woke up I said rockey! rockey! where are you boy come home to me''! but rockey! was just in the bosch  having a nice sleep.

                                   THE END                            
 

One day me and my brother and sister was playing hide seek but my cat was sleeping and when he woke up like a lion he sheikh  as big as a giraffe's neck he smat something yummy like he's nose was big like a hippo's nose to small but when I woke up I said rockey! rockey! where are you boy come home to me''! but rockey! was just in the bosch  having a nice sleep.

                                   THE END